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He looked at her with emotionless eyes and said “five minutes. That all you have to get out of this house or I swear to God I will blast this house.”
He said and sat on the couch. He looked at her to see that she was still sitting on the floor.
“4 minutes.” He said and looked at his watch.
She stood up and wore her clothes. That man wore his clothes and ran from the house.
She was about to pack her clothes but he stood up and grabbed her hand and said “you time is over. Now get out.”
“But my stuff-” he cut her off and shouted “out”.
She picked up her purse from the table and about to run but he grabbed her hand.
She looked at him with a relief face and said: ” I know you love me and won’t leave me.”
He just took his ring from her finger and the house keys then pushed her.
“Out,” he said in a cold voice She just gave him a look and ran from the house. He heard the sound of the door slamming.
He sat on his knees and held his hair in his fist and pulled it. He screamed and started to cry on his fate.
After for some time, he realised that not all woman are going to be like his mother.
All the woman are like his stepmother. She left them all alone and ran with some bastard.
He made a promise to himself that he won’t love anyone now. All are after his money and his fame.
Now he is going to show them his cruel face. His father was right if we give them love then they would leave us alone.
He wiped his tears and promised himself that he won’t show his soft side to anyone.
(Jack 26, Anna 18 and Charlotte 20)
He was sitting on a stool in the bar and gulped down his drink. This was his 5th glass of whiskey.
But it didn’t make any difference to him as his tolerance limit is high.
He stood up from his seat and paid the bartender who smiled at him.
He was about to leave when he bumped into something or someone.
“I am so sorry sir. Please accept my apology” he heard a soft silky voice.
He pulled back and saw that it was a girl who was according to him the most beautiful girl after his mother.
He saw her dress. She was wearing a white blouse and black skirt. Her hair was tied into a ponytail and some strands were falling on her face.
Her eyes were green with a shade of blue. Her face was glowing but he could see the tiredness which her face was reflecting.
He was staring at her which made her uncomfortable. She cleared her throat he came back into this world and shook his head.
“No need to say sorry as it was me who bumped into you. What is your name beautiful?” He asked her with a flirty tone Now he doesn’t need to worry about a new girl for the night. She is going to be his for the night.
“My name is Anastasia Dawson. I should leave sir. It’s nice to meet you.” She said and was about to leave but he grabbed her wrist.
He pulled her to him and leaned down to whisper in her ears “Spend the night with me and you don’t have to work ever.”
She jerked her hand politely and said “I am sorry sir but I am not that type of girl. I am a one-man woman and I will spend the night with my husband. Excuse me.”
She ran away and he was gawking at her retreating form in rage.
She is just like that bitch Amanda and any other girl. Then why was she showing me her attitude?
You wanted to spend your time with me your husband right. Then you will spend with him and soon.
He sent her name to his man and told him to find information about this girl.
After getting the information, he went to her family and told them that he wanted to marry her.
But to his surprise, they agreed without any problem. He just shrugged and told them to arrange it soon.
Third Person POV
(Jack 27, Anna 19 and Charlotte 21)
(Anna’s delivery day)
He woke up when he heard the knock on his door. He frowned and saw that it was nighttime.
He got up and opened the door and saw a maid standing outside his door with a nervous face.
“Sir your brother came and told me to give you this.” She said and gave him his phone.
He looked at his phone in confusion and took it from her and told her to go.
He looked at his phone and saw 70 missed calls from Maria. His eyes got widened he remembered about Anna.
He hurriedly calls her and she picked it up within second and heard her sniffing “Hello”
“Maria. How is Anna? Is she alright and what’s happening.” He asked her in one breath.
“Jack” he heard her voice cracking and his heart started to beat faster.
“Jack, Anna is in a coma. Her pregnancy was complicated and she had to choose between herself and her babies and she chose her babies.” He heard her sobbing over the phone.
He started to breathe heavily and he felt an unfamiliar sting in his eyes.
“Maria I…I am coming.” He stuttered then hanged the call.
The phone fell on the floor and Jack sat on the bed with a heavy heart. He shouldn’t have slept.
He should be there for her. He should have helped her. He should be there to tell that doctor to save his wife.
How can Rose do that to him after knowing what he had gone through?
He felt rage in his veins and he walked toward Charlotte’s room and saw that she was sitting on the bed just staring ahead.
“Charlotte come. We have to go to the hospital.” He told and dragged her toward the main door.
“But why what happened.” She asked him in worry.
He sat in the car and drove to the hospital and said: “Anna is in a coma.”
“What ” she yelled in surprise.
But he didn’t say anything and just concentrate on the road.
They reached and he ran toward the reception and asked her about Anna.
She told him her room number and they went toward the ICU.
Rose walked out of the room and Jack was about to ask her about Anna but stopped when he felt a slap on his face.
I am guessing English is not your first language.
It would help if you had someone to proofread your writing as it gets confusing and your spelling and grammar need a lot to be desired.
One more thing… Bi-polar does not cause you to act in the manner Jack has.
Contact me if you want someone to review it to improve your story.
I’m not the greatest but I could definitely help your story and make it easier to read for people who speak English.
Not sure how you are going to get Jack out of this mess. Might be better for her to move far far away and start over.
No one should ever be forgiven for what he has done.
He is just evil and bipolar isn’t an excuse. He is a psychopath.